RED MEAT Agouti gumdrops from the secret files of max cannon
Dan, what's this I hear about you stalking the customers?
All a misunderstanding, sir. I was simply making sure they were enjoying our wide variety of dairy products.
What about the binoculars the police caught you with?
Simply assuring myself that what they said to my face they meant behind closed doors, that's all.
And the high-powered Remington?
In case they didn't. Please, sir, try to keep up.
2004-09-12 20:59:11By The Hanged Man

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7love Dan's #3
7Good pacing with merry psychopathy -- Nuke
7Even though I didn't laugh, this is solid..crz
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6He looks like a Winchester man to me
6Dialog sounds great. Paying attention doesn't help it though -herp
6Your heart's certainly in the right place. --VX
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6"High-powered" seems like unneccessary wording, but this is pretty tight.
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5Nah, though I like the tag
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5A little plodding... -cm
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