RED MEAT tofu soylent green from the secret files of max cannon
About a week ago I got this shiny new laser pointer.
My darn boss took it away at work, for shining it in people's eyes.
He also took the high-powered rifle it was attached to.
2004-01-04 12:53:40By bongthegong

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9Take out the word "darn" and the comma and this is absolutely flawless. --VX
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8i'd say the wording is perfect already
8very good
7Who the hell rated this a 3? -- Nuke
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7Damn you! I wanted to use "soylent green" in a tag :)
7--THM
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7Nitpicking: how 'bout "He also took the attached high-powered rifle."?
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7hah! I love that Earl is more excited about the 'shiny' laser than the gun -IS
7Made me smile. --John
7Slick and simple, like a mentally defective walrus - Tam
7I likes this..crz
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6Fine by me, but "high powered" just adds wordiness.
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6Yeah this is good.
6Passable Earl (CB)
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5About as limp as a competent one can get
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