RED MEAT One Hit and Run Wonder from the secret files of max cannon
Your Christmas holiday is very strange. I made Ted very angry by misinterpreting eggnog as throwing eggs at his noggin.
No, it's an egg drink mixed with rum. In the olde world, they called rum grog and thus egg and grog soon became changed and known as egg nog.
A most logical explanation.
A milkman's knowledge of holiday spirit is quite extensive.
I wish I sought out your counsel prior to my deciding what missile toe was.
Judging from the smoke coming from your arm silos, I think you guessed right. But in case you neglected to know how Christmas carolers were involved, come with me.
2003-12-08 13:08:33By Preloggy

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7Absolutely adorable Bix dialogue, especially in 2. --VX
6 - BFJ - I like the missile toe idea
6Dialogue needs tightening in a bad way, but dig the ideas here. -PB
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6Wordy, but at the same time, the words are good. Paradox.
6Waaay too longwinded..crz
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6+1 for making me smile on a bad day. I concur with Mr. X. -DG
6Dialogue awkward -- "neglected to know?" -- but good concept. -- THM
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5loved this up to MMD 3 (CB)
5Dan's 3 sinks it - bbg
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5How about Santa coming down your chimney
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4This needs major Xmas Tree Trimming
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4very awkward
4Too wordy. --opus
4Hoo boy is this labored

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