RED MEAT diet pills for starving children from the secret files of max cannon
I'm a strange visitor from another world, imbued with incredible powers beyond imagination.
So you admit to being an illegal alien with no valid work visa?
But I help the world through my clever monlogue and buns of steel.
Save it. All your doing is taking jobs away from legal citizens. What can you offer Uncle Sam they can't?
Is this twenty thousand dollars adequate enough detective?
Should do it. I'll chock it up as coincidence that that's the amount stolen from the First Bank of Mayberry yesterday.
2003-11-14 15:01:09By Nuke-Marine

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9much better -cm
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7better -IS
7This is so cool. Oddly effective tag, too. --VX
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6Stacy's 3 could still be better, but not bad. "You're."
6It's still "Monologue"
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6HW
6It's "chalk", BTW.
6Good setup, falls apart a bit at the end -- jnc
6"adequate enough"? -FV
6Good byplay, so-so finish -- THM
6Better. Stacy 3 clunks a bit (and it's "chalk," not "chock"), but better. -PB
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5#1 was great set up, but #'s 2 and 3 let the joke down. Preloggy
5All that for a bribe strip - Stacy 3 doesn't quite save (CB)
5not much of an ending -herp
5Average even without grammar errors..crz
5"you're"
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5"chalk," btw. -IF
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3-1 for poor orthography; not much funny elsewhere, either -bbg
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3Sub-literate writing

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