RED MEAT In the dark, it ain't about black or white. It's about who washed. from the secret files of max cannon
Dad, you need to take that down. You're scaring the neighborhood kids.
That's what Halloween decorations are meant to do.
But the screams are going to keep me up at night.
Son, that's why God invented earplugs.
Wouldn't it have been easier to kill Johnny Lemonhead when you carved him into a Jack O'Latern?
Of course son but you have to look at the big picture. One, the bloody lemon juice and screaming add to the effect. Two, what would we have for next year?
2003-10-26 21:41:26By Nuke-Marine

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7EAUGH. Not marking you down, but Ted #3 could use another comma.
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6How could he survive it, though?--HW
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6Ted #3 is wordy. -cm
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6fair effort - could use a little tidying (CB)
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5Way too long to get there
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5Sometimes, too many words can suffocate your punchline. Trust me. -PB
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5This has potential, but the long-winded third panel saps some of the impact. -DG
5a bit wordy (use commas). -IF
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5doesn't quite get over the line -bbg
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3Boo. And I'm not just saying that. --VX

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