RED MEAT The Rhino in your Lino from the secret files of max cannon
Why are you answering Don's door?
Don's tied up right now.
Uh, I'll be off then.
All I meant was he's answering the phone! You people are all the same. You think I'm some sort of weirdo! You never want to talk to me! Every time someone goes missing I get funny looks... All I want is to be loved!
Gee, I'm sorry Vince. I had no idea you felt like that! I guess I've got time for a chat.
Step inside.
2003-09-18 17:58:15By Interesting Steve

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7lose the "all I want is to be loved" for an 8 -bbg
7-DB
7Nice break of character for Vince. --John
7(Tag?) #2 Vince too wordy, #3 wonderfully evil -gb/cf
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7Interesting, Steve.
7Good Vince, though 2 could be trimmed.
7
7-FV
7Omnious, but indirectly. Not bad.
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6's good. But what's a Lino?
6Vince 2 distracting and out of character, but 3 very nicely menacing. -PB
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6Vince is a little OOC
6
6+ 1 for meanace, but needs more - CH
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6Vince's 2 is good until the "loved" part, needs a better 3.
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6fair enough (CB)
5 - BFJ -
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5I can't imagine Vince talking so much.
4Meh. Th'lab. --VX
4Vince's 3 needs something more. --opus
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2This is so out of character for both it's ridiculous.

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