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Boy that Wile E. Coyote cartoon sure do cracks me up.
The way he's always goin' over a cliff but gets right back up agin.
Great Clyde. Now where's my dog that you were walking for me?
I wuz just getting to that.
2003-09-18 13:35:15By Preloggy

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8Saw it a' comin', but it gets an 8. -gb/cf
7Second half of Ted three is unnecessary, but still nice
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7Meatish but Ted's #3 could still be improved (CB).
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7Ted's 3 clumsy. Maybe drop "for me".
7"that you were walking for me" is awkward. but overall, funny. -FV
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6+1 cuz Wile E is my personal hero. -PB
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6Very promising premise, but the dialog could be better.
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6Tighten up Ted's #3 -Cap'n
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5Maybe better setup.
5Dialogue just fine, but the punchline has been beaten to death.
5Needs more - CH
5I got there first. --opus
4awkward phrasings -cm
4Thet's sum baaad dialectin'. --VX
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3Clyde's the moron. Ted isn't.

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