RED MEAT John Ritter: Come and Knock on Death's Door (oops) from the secret files of max cannon
We've had a great time and all.
Yeah. Woooho!
But we're all getting tired and my wife wants you to leave.
Oh, come on! What sort of party end at 10 p.m.?
A child's funeral reception.
Oh, yeah. Sorry about killing him.
2003-09-12 20:47:31By Hysterical Woman

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9Double punchline = dance all night
9Sheer brilliance. - CH
9Nice rim shot and the tag is unbelievably tasteless. --John
8Flippant Dan 3 kills me. -PB
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82 black humour classics in a row --J.
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7 - BFJ -
7-DB
7Essence of MMD, fix "ends" and "woooho" for +1
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7This could be absolute gold, but Dan's #3 could use a little rewording for it.
6This had the potential for a 10, but MMD's lines aren't very good, especially 3
6MMD remorseful? Hmm... -cf
6OK but MMD's #3 is OTT. (CB)
6Dan speaks like a caveman in 2, but this concept has potential
6Dialog is a bit awkward, and don't like MMD 3 -cm
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5was a 7 till Dan's #3
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5Cut off the frayed ends (onomatopoeias, Dan 3, etc.) and this is pure gold. --VX
5Blunt Dan three, typo in two not corrected. This could be soooo good
4Dan's 3 ruins it, dialog needs work.
4You need to develop a better command of the language
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4Text doesn't flow well (Dan's 3 bombs), and punctuation is wonky -bbg
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4Open-ish
4-FV
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3Tactless. Dan's lines are all disasters.
1Not so great

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