RED MEAT hock hock hockin' on bevan's floor from the secret files of max cannon
Ted, why don't you come back inside? Dinner is getting cold.
No dice, sweetheart. Just one whiff of your stroganoff sent me back to the depths of my bruised past.
Honey, come inside. The neighborhood children are getting upset.
No deal there either. These kids have to learn the tainted truth about what awaits them after the loss of their sheltered innocence.
A troubled husband with no pants?
I was thinking a wife who uses cinnamon, potted meat, and mayonnaise as the key ingredients to every dish. But based on the screaming, I think the no-pants thing gives them the general idea.
2002-11-25 13:50:07By propsero

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8Me likey. Welcome to the freak show. ~afh
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7heh, pretty meaty. -todcra
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7The dialogue's good.
7Cinnamon, potted meat, and mayo . . . yum . . . -PB
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7 - BFJ -
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6cool
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6Ted 3 is great - but the no pants thing is overdone..crz
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6a little wordy, but good
6Joke is obvious from panel 1, but Ted's dialogue more than compensates. --VX
6Bit wordy but okay no-pants joke.
6Ted's 3 is way anticlimatic
6kinda wordy, but in a good way. -JM
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5Too wordy (especially in 3) but a decent idea I think.
5I kinda like the twist in #3, but I think it needs to be brought out more.
5Wordy without delivering a solid laugh. Preloggy
5-FV
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5too winded
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5I know everyone else will say it, but: Wordy. Trim down #3.
5-bbg
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5-DB
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5Fair. Obvious, but fair.
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5Wow, Ted without pants?
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5could he be doing something with his hands instead?
4Way too wordy. -- opus
3I knew it was a no pants gag from word 7 (CB)
3wtf?

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