RED MEAT Rainbow Blight from the secret files of max cannon
Dan, I lost my new kitten!
Well, think back, where was the last place you saw it?
I checked, she's not there anymore.
That's strange, it's not like she could just get up and walk away.
Actually Dan, yes, she could.
That's right, I was thinking of the last place I saw her.
2002-11-19 11:11:54By Squad Car

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9Solid joke, great writing. -S
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8Wow, I like this too.
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8Sound. An 8 cos I'm not giving enough of 'em.
8mentally bold the last I and it's perfect.
8Very well done..crz
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7Clever - a cut above the usual Karen/MMD/Kitten strips (CB)
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7Karen 3 a bit ooc. Otherwise excellent. -IF
7hah, yeah... Also, all the commas are correct.-todcra
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7-FV
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7If it weren't so choppy, this would be fantastic
6-DB
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6Reminds me of a Carlin gag, in a good way. -PB
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6NICE last line. -DG
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6Fix Karen's #3 and it'll be pretty good -JM
6Love the tagline, for some reason.
6Cute enough, but for God's sake let's get a new Dan/Karen theme
6Good premise - MMD # 3 could get better. Preloggy
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6you're very close. but it's clunky. rewrite? Vaca
5Too many commas, so why am I here? --VX
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5-- opus
5dan's 3 doesnt seem to fit in as well as it could
5Made me think for a second, but it's not funny.
5karen's 3 too mature --J.
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3Hasn't this been done before? ~afh

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