RED MEAT Down-lined flak jackets from the secret files of max cannon
Want to guess where I've hidden your bike?
You're silly, my bike is right over there.
Okay, guess where I've hidden your new doll.
It's right next to my bike.
Now can you guess where I've hidden an antipersonnel land mine?
I hate you Milkman Dan!
2002-11-05 14:07:55By Jmillius

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10LOL
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8Good pacing, nice work.
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8close to perfect indeed --J.
8Go for it, Karen! --VX
8The pacing is perfect.
8this kicks ass!
8I liked the "you're silly" ~afh
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7Yeah, that's pretty good; +1 on reread
7-FV
7Changed my mind. "You're silly" takes care of that. Preloggy
7nice if OTT (CB)
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7heh. -todcra
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7+1 on reread
7Nice twist, though "antipersonnel" is unneccesary
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6not bad
6Some people would call this formula "tired"; I call it "reliable for a grin."
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6-PB
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6 - BFJ -
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6Standard but good.
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5This is just ok as far as I'm concerned.
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