RED MEAT ball and pain from the secret files of max cannon
I thought you got fired from your McMoo job, Milkman Dan.
Sadly, I was relived of that duty.
So why are you still wearing that ridiculous costume?
I'm no longer McMoo the anti-drug cow, I'm now McMoo the crime cow.
Why would an anti-crime promoter still continue to run over my pets?
I never said I was an anti-crime cow.
2002-09-30 22:56:10By bongthegong

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8heh. -todcra
8Yessir, that's my McMoo. Preloggy
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7misspelling, but still awesome. -IF
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7Opening is slow, ending works just fine
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7Not bad, but in #1, he essentially repeats what Karen just said.
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6Kind of obvious - and it's relieved.
6(7/0.70 - it's a technique called affirmation)
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6I love the image of Dan committing crimes in his McMoo suit.
6Quite meaty - could be improved further still (CB)
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6Sound idea. -PB
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5Cute idea. Proofread, for Christ's sake. -1 for boring old pet killing.
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5Too obvious. -- opus
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5really obvious
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5weak and predictable from 2 on.
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5This needs a rewrite. Badly. --VX
4the anti thing is ancient
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