RED MEAT all agog over leapfrog again from the secret files of max cannon
Hey, Vincerino. I think the paperboy screwed up and threw my paper on your lawn.
Yes.
Well... Do you think I could have it back?
Yes.
OK, let me try another tack. Where is my paper?
Spread out on the floor of my cellar. You will also enjoy the exercise wheel I have constructed for you down there.
2002-04-19 15:42:53By Bernt Pancreas

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9--todcra
8Much smoother. No further changes necessary. Bravo.
8Sick and wrong. +2 points! CH
8Vincerino? crz
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8I like this. A lot. --VX
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7Ted the pet is a fine idea (CB)
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7+1 'cuz I stole it for my own purposes. -PB
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7Okay, though I'd still trim Vince's 3
7Ted's dialogue in #3 a little stilted.
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6Vince 3 seems too glib.
6it is smoother. +1 for that. - gtd
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6Vaca
6Ted's 3 doesn't logically follow Vince's 2. It's okay though.
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5What's a tack?
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4Strip is solid, but the whole idea just does nothing for me, I'm afraid.
4No difference that I can see -- HoE
4I don't like it

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