RED MEAT A Winter Haiku from the secret files of max cannon
May snow never melt.
Snow is magical and fun.
Plus I've hid corpses.
2002-03-14 19:21:58By schizoguy

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8I'll have to explore Earl haiku too
7Cute. Made me laugh. Afg.
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7Was set to kick it in the nuts 'til I read tag and read it as Haiku. -PB
7Elegant.
7The vision of Earl saying panel two is wonderful
7And it's about nature, so it's a real Haiku!
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7Yeah change 3 to what that guy says. Otherwise this is sound.
6I like the cheekiness of this (CB)
6This is pretty good..crz
6Pretty standard, even the haiku part
6-FV
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6I'm debating 7. Good job keeping it "Earl-like" and in haiku form. - DG
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6might be better as "plus it hides.."
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5-DB
5I've seen more original haiku. +1 for the effort tho
5 - BFJ -
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5His 2 is so OOC its funny
5I like it. --todcra
5'5' is about as high as I'll rank haiku without a seriously twisted twist.
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4Good idea but disjointed. - opus
4Not worth the effort. --TRT
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4Clever, not funny
4I hate all haiku.
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3#3: "Plus it hides corpses". Even that might not help...
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3Inventive idea, meh execution -Cap'n
2Haiku is an iffy premise. This fails to fix that.

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